Comments : Perfect night

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Very nice poem. I loved the that it had a nice flow. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Chad Picard

    Hmm... well done! You've managed to write a happy poem I actually like. Off the top of my head, yours is the first I've encountered that I wouldn't call sappy. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Debbie

    This was rather delightful to read. I love the part where laughter broke off the silence, it seems both of you are going on rather well. =) On the whole, it's a cute poem. A joy to read! ~Debbie

  • 17 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    Great poem.

    You look into my blue eyes,
    and pull back my hair,
    and promised me the world,
    right then, right there.

    It's superb. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by BreeAnna

    Thank you to all of you... I am currently single.. this poem has nothing to do with me... I guess its what I wish for me in the future... if anyone wonders this... who this is about.. the future..

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This was an interesting poem , quite enjoyeable to read liked it alot Very sweetly written. Well done with this nicely penned poem~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    Awww.. veryy sweet poem.. the flow was amazing and very easy to read.. excellent job.. I really enjoyed it and it made me smile. Keep it up =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    This is an excellent poem, the flow is excellent in this one and the topic is sweet. I liked the last stanza best, it really ended the poem nicely. great job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Ur perfect night is really a perfect poem with overflowing feelings n good rhymes. wow great 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Silently He walks

    =D well written. Your use of imagery was fantastic. Great job!