Comments : Dirty Little Secret!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaetaj

    Put them in stansas; it'll look better and people will wanna read it more...advice ok?:)

  • 17 years ago

    by Berenice

    What is stansas

  • 17 years ago

    by miss insecurity

    You should set that out in a proper structure :D

    it already rymes doesnt it?

    it will make it easier to read and more appealing XD

    but its a really good poem!

    keep it up :]