If only life were drawn in pencil
and in our hands,
we held erasers
prepared for any plan, good or bad.

I crumpled up the paper
for it was not what I wanted it to be.
I closed my sketch book.
If only in life it were that simple. If only..

Those two stanzas didn't flow as well as your
Other stanzas.
This could actually turn into a song.
Lol.
I love this.
Although I have not been, a serious one.
I do understand what you're talking about.
You made it easy for everyone to read.
It's actualy quite... delightful my dear.
5/5?

Now this was diffrent, and the reption was amazing, I loved this poem , the floow seemed good, and the emtion was clear, and deep, and the word choice was excelllent. I liked this one the best so far. an I agreee, it could be song lyics.

It's so true that we all make mistakes in life and we wish we could just erase them like we could a drawing, it never seems that simple though. Excellent job again with great flow 5/5 from me

Wow i like this. its amazing ... i like the part when you said there was a couple with a love so sweet. 5/5

Oh.... woah... I don't have words for that that was just awesome. 5/5!!

Another great topic. Don't we all at one time or another wish we could erase a portion of something we have done - wow! This was very well written.