No more faking it

by BrokenBarbie   May 22, 2007


Night rolls in
the tears start to poor
from the life i lead
i cant take anymore

no more laughing
or faking a grin
i cant keep it up
when I'm dying within

i make it till night time
but secretly i don't want to wake up
everything everyones says
makes me want to cut

i close my eyes
in hope the pain just bleeds threw
but when i close my eyes
all i see is you

just leave me alone
get out of my head
your ruining my life
and making me wish i was dead

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  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Sweets,

    That was heartbreaking. I hope you don't really feel that way. It was painful & intensly written. The flow was flawless & the word choice was great.

    "no more laughing
    or faking a grin
    i cant keep it up
    when I'm dying within"

    ^ My favorite lines. Superb job, keep writing! 5.5 =)

    Stephanie Lynn .+.