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by BrokenBarbie May 22, 2007 category : Sadness, depression / about depression
Night rolls in the tears start to poor from the life i lead i cant take anymore no more laughing or faking a grin i cant keep it up when I'm dying within i make it till night time but secretly i don't want to wake up everything everyones says makes me want to cut i close my eyes in hope the pain just bleeds threw but when i close my eyes all i see is you just leave me alone get out of my head your ruining my life and making me wish i was dead
by Stephanie
Sweets, That was heartbreaking. I hope you don't really feel that way. It was painful & intensly written. The flow was flawless & the word choice was great. "no more laughing or faking a grin i cant keep it up when I'm dying within" ^ My favorite lines. Superb job, keep writing! 5.5 =) Stephanie Lynn .+.