I actually signed for the first time in over a year leese :) |
by Wallace
Excellent poem, very well written. Keep up the good work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time. |
by kitkat girl
I like this poem, i can really relate to were you coming from too. I like the opening line to, very cool. |
WOW!!...beautiul poem...excellently penned the meaning of best friends |
by Jessica
Wooww. This was really good hunny. Actually, I think I'm going to add you to my favourite'ss. I loved your use of vocabulary in this it really brought out what you were trying to say. The flow was good and the descriptions were filled with great imagery. Lovely job. 5/5 |
by Startle Me
Wow. |
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by .K.i.T.t.Y.
I loved this poem... the wording captured the whole thing, it was perfect. the different view of best friend was great! thanks for the comment btw. i'll go find a way to flow the last two lines. if you have any input on how to, please help. |
by ShadowDancer
LOVE IT! i love how compleatly unexpected the portrayal of best friends was, and how the title gave no hint of it. wonderful!!! |
This a good poem, i love the way you use your words. My favorite part was: "Sweetie, this is what they call friendship." I just love that line...5/5 Keep it up girl! |
by Marc Ortiz
Beautiful Acrostic you have hear! I like the word created in this amazing poem! well done word choice is good! XD 5/5! |
-=Steals some of Lee-sah's talent!=- Gosh, babe. You're an amazing poet, don't ever believe otherwise. That was an amazing acrostic. I loved all the words you chose. It was just that great, Sweetie. xxxx |
by Vanessa
Such a deep friendship poem, not at all what I had expected, the flow was great, the word choice was amazing, and the emtion was strong. You did an excellent job here, really 5/5 even though I wish i could give you more |
Lisa, this is a veryy good poem. I loves it. You are an amazing writer. Strong emotion and gret use of words. Excellent job. 5/5 |
Very nice poem! I like it a lot! Love your word choice... you are a very talented writer!! |
I absolutely love it. |