Truths Lies

by Good Enough   May 22, 2007


Darkened days cloudy skys
Betrayed by all your stupid lies
Safety pins razor blades
All the truth starts to fade
Blood drips blood pours
The truth is all i wanted more
Bandages peroxide
This stupid shit Ive got to hide
Long sleeves sweatshirts
All these lies start to hurt
little lines little scars
The truth is now very far

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  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    "Safety pins [,] razor blades"

    "Long sleeves [,] sweatshirts"

    ^ Should there be comma's right there? I think so... Correct me if I'm wrong.

    Anyway, beside those little mistakes - It was purely fantastic!! =] So emotional & well written... Vivid imagery & the flow was flawless. You're a terrific writer, keep it up! 5.5

    Stephanie Lynn .+.

  • 17 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Ah, love
    this poem was amazing.
    5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Chemically Corrupted

    Ashley, this poem is so sad

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