I'll Miss Saying

by BeautifulxMess   May 22, 2007


I wish I could wake up, and know this is all a nightmare.
But it's not that simple, I have to accept we're not together.
I never saw this coming; it slapped me in the face.
You said that you loved me, and you said we'd be forever.

But forever came too soon, and you want to move on.
I really want to try, but I can't stop thinking about you.
All of the memories and laughs we shared as one.
They might not happen again, and it's hard to find that true.

I'll be the best friend I could be to you and more.
There still is a chance, hopefully we'll be together again.
The future only endures what have yet to find out.
My feelings won't change, but we'll never be the same.

I'll miss the times we made love together.
All the times we spent that were true.
I"ll miss calling you sweetheart, and me baby.
But mostly, I'll miss saying, I Love You....

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  • 17 years ago

    by Prophecies In Kodak

    Aha. I've never been big on short form, really. Always liked a little length. But this poem for some reason caught my attention.
    The rhyming went together well. The lines were orginial, yet simple and complex as well.
    This really came out nicely. I'm impressed
    5/5

    Take care.

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This poem was truely beautiful, The emotions were really strong and you portrayed them powerfully deep and sweetly. Your word choice fitted perfectly for this type of poem.

    The future only endures what have yet to find out.
    My feelings won't change, but we'll never be the same.

    Those two lines were so heartfelt it was truely beautifully sad. Well done with this nicely penned poem~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    Excellent poem, very well written. Keep up the good work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

    Best Wishes
    Wallace

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