Excellent poem, very well written. Keep up the good work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

This poem was truely beautiful, The emotions were really strong and you portrayed them powerfully deep and sweetly. Your word choice fitted perfectly for this type of poem.

The future only endures what have yet to find out.
My feelings won't change, but we'll never be the same.

Those two lines were so heartfelt it was truely beautifully sad. Well done with this nicely penned poem~mel

Aha. I've never been big on short form, really. Always liked a little length. But this poem for some reason caught my attention.
The rhyming went together well. The lines were orginial, yet simple and complex as well.
This really came out nicely. I'm impressed
5/5

Take care.