Wow. Wonderful job.
It was emotinal & strongly written. I could feel the sadness & pain pouring out through every word. The flow was flawless & the word choice was good.

"Im the girl you walk by with no words spoken,
I am the girl in the corner wishing to be set free,
Im the girl who has nothing to live for but one single memory,
A memory of a time when i used to be happy,"

^ My favorite lines. Superb job, keep writing! 5.5 =)

Stephanie Lynn .+.