Ahh... yep. I have those times... those times where you just have to write or you feel like your going to explode with intense emotions.... For just venting, this poem was truly wonderful. It was emotional & powerful. Fabulous job, keep writing! 5.5 =)

Stephanie Lynn .+.

I agree....i loved this, and venting always helps. good job!

Sarah

Wow, that is very strong. Lots of emotion.
Great job. You have a true passion.
Amber

Its not terrible ,it was very well done.I felt the emotion ,and like me it seems you write to let things out.

I like the way you formatted this poem..its a great poem..it kept we reading and it kept me interested...i like how it really relates to alot of things people go through...5/5