It's very beautiful. I felt every emotion in this poem. It's just perfect the way it's written. Great job. 5/5

And yet another breath taking poem. I like the way you write your poems. They're full of emotion. You've got great talent. 5/5

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I LOVED THIS ONE!

my favorite lines were

Breath in my soul and kiss the depths,
deep down inside is where your innocence is kept,

those words really showed the emotion you were trying to express in this writing

amazingly done