by BrokenREALiTy May 23, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
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You see, there's this boy, |
by Christina
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Another great piece of work! and i bet that was hard realizing u werent the one! |
by Blissful
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Beautiful! I loved the beginning, how you described such a sweet and innocent love, it was very refreshing. And then I enjoyed the dark side of it also and the last sentence was just wow. The poem altogether was a joy. Well done you are truly talented and are going into my favorites *5/5* |
by Lozbi
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That's beautiful. Great rhythm and the way you put the words together was good. |
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The flow was kinda rough but still a great piece words come out and speak to ppl and that is an amazing talent |
by Tricky Daze
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The mystery was all over the poem..but you shouldn't give up fight,ng in life to have what you want..the flow of it was liquidy and the punctuation was well |