by BrokenREALiTy May 23, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
You see, there's this boy, |
by Christina
Another great piece of work! and i bet that was hard realizing u werent the one! |
by Blissful
Beautiful! I loved the beginning, how you described such a sweet and innocent love, it was very refreshing. And then I enjoyed the dark side of it also and the last sentence was just wow. The poem altogether was a joy. Well done you are truly talented and are going into my favorites *5/5* |
by Lozbi
That's beautiful. Great rhythm and the way you put the words together was good. |
The flow was kinda rough but still a great piece words come out and speak to ppl and that is an amazing talent |
by Tricky Daze
The mystery was all over the poem..but you shouldn't give up fight,ng in life to have what you want..the flow of it was liquidy and the punctuation was well |