Whoa! I like this -- this has tugged my heart exceedingly!

In general, the subject's compassionate and sombre tone of voice endears to me a slightly plaintive yearning for support and so-ons and so-ons... It was short, simple, whereas it was quite effective in delivering its message. Nicely done!

Debbie

This was the best of yours ive read. The poem was short but portrayed so much so simply really heartfelt and capturing. I found this poem to be effective and powerful. Well done on this~mel