Very good vocabulary
I really liked the imagery as well in this poem
You were very creative with the way you write thing
I loved the rush in this poem
it made me want to read and re-read
great poem
5/5
love always
kaila

One word: WOW!
Amazing.. Absolutly amazing.
This peice was so well written, My heart is racing, and Im on edge!
The flow was so correct, just perfect. The emotion's we flowing from this master peice, and the meaning ran so deep.
Hope to read more of you splendid work..
Elaine

Wonderful poem... the descriptions are vivid and the flow is fantastic.. the poem is filled with emtoion and the words come out really strong.. you get just the right vibe across and didnt over power your words with the rhymes.. perfect placement of words.. keep up the nice work :D

HI,That was an excellent poem,i love it ,great wording,very nice flow ,and told from the heart

:This pain will just have to exist
Fate has such a cruel twist,
No more tears are to roll down my face
For in Heaven I will find my place.
Great job proud of you , great talent ,~5/5~ your friend Tracy

My heartbeat increases, I start to sweat
Terrified of things, that haven't happened yet.

i LOVED THOSE TWO LiNES . Along with most of the rest of the poem . I was definitely enraptured in the poem .

I don't want all my tears cried to be in vain
I don`t want all my tears to be cried in vain

Every word I yell and scream,
Attempting to wake from this dream,

I can totally relate . Definitely . The poem was just wow . Some of the rhymes are so overused tho -- And I can tell from the rest of the poem that you can do better than that .
..__MiNDYY

I agree with all of the above comments. This poem is outstanding in flow a content. I must say that your style is one that I love.

I loved this poem inparticularly. It has a nice, easy flow and you expressed yourself very well. Good job!

Sending me into a panic attack.
That sounded a little forced to me.
Don't ask me why, it was just a flow thing for me.

My vision blurs, everything goes dim,
All I see are memories of him.
Once again, out of flow for me.

Ugh.
Okay.
This poem?
Really cliched...
I'm sick of reading about tears.
There's more to life that tears.
Why do I keep reading about it?
I don't know...
Maybe it's not you in general.
But it's just, I'm tired of it.
I refused to vote knowing I'll give you
A low grade.
Cheers.

Cliche, but well written keep up the good work

Wow... these words are very strong and deep. i like the way you went about writing this one. great job. keep up the great work

Wow this poem is very good. i loved reading every word. wonderful job :]

Well writien short sweet and to the point. I really loved the emtion you showed and i really liked the word choice, it was perfect. 5/5 for you deserve nothing less.

Wow once again an amazing poem.. you really have a way of describing emotions and feelings which make them come to life and allow the reader toa ctually feel them.. keep writing.. you have amazing talent. =]

So Much Flow..So Much Emotion..So Much Sadness...So Good Of A Poem....10/5 =P