Great poem .. v. nice .. deep meaning .. a lot of emotions .. good job :D

I love the way you rhymed it. It's deep and well written.

Great poem. I see you really want this person, but life goes on. There's always more candy in the candyshop. Great poem though 5/5
-vino

I like this poem not only bc its flow and powerful emotion but also im fellin the same way

Great poem, short but meanigful, i love it. Alot of people would be able to relate to this! look forward to reading more of your work

NICE POEM!!! I'D LOVE UR FEED BACK SEE WHAT U THINK OF MINE

Wow...I loved the last line out of the whole poem..
I loved your poems it has so much to do with me & the person I love!
thank you for lettin me read this poem =)
best of luck & keep holdin on
&& thanx alot for the sweet comment
xxxxx

Like this too
nice choice of words

Now that is really sweet and cute, it made it good how it was short and sweet, easy to understand and follow, soft claming and smoothe and i liked how it rythmed it was very sweet. and it came from the heart,
nice work!

=]
good poem,
i like alot.
xx

I FEEL LIKE THIS WITH MY BEST FRIEND!BUT MY SITUATION IS SORTA DIFF.
SORRY I WRITE TOO MUCH BUT YOU HAVE GREAT POEMS!
CIAO!
~*~@NN@M@R!3~*~

Thats really goood<3

Very emotional and sad but well written and love the message behind it keep writting..=)

I am here <3

Oh my gosh.. I'm seriously on the verge of tears right now. That hit home really hard. I'm feeling the exact same way right now..

That was really amazing. You are a very talented writer! I'm about to add you to my favorites! I love your poems!

Cayce xx

Youve done it again
this poem is so sad yet sweet i love it 5/5

I like your poem