A Very beautiful poem!!!

God bless u

That was beautiful, really put a smile on my face.

Take care, xxxx

I think that you could have expanded all of this into a larger poem that allowed for a smoother flow, but this small poem was pretty well written. I think you need to work on syllabication, for it makes your poem lose it's flow, which obviously makes the reader stumble while reading it, decreasing the effect of the poem therefore decreasing the reader's overall opinion. Despite all that, you managed to write a wonderful poem.

5/5
~Stephen White

Wow, i love the poem, specially the end, it said alot. as always a wonderful poem by a great writer.

While sitting out on the coast.
` Totally threw off the flow for me .

It`s disappointing that this was so short, but it was pretty good . I feel like there`s something missing -- & it`s not the length . I foudn myself staggar at one point while reading it out loud . The flow wasn`t perfect, but overall, I liked it . It started with cuddles and everything, which gave me this impression of youth love . Or college love or something innocent you know ? And then the wedding vows pops up and I`m like whoa .
It kinda made me think that `tho exchanging wedding vows is something serious, and normally seen as what more "adult" people do, there`s still an innocent and purity held with in it that`s ... not exactly naive but just young (:

Wow . I ramble . LOL` sorry xD
..__MiNDYY

It was good, i liked but it didnt have i dont know. cant describe it.

Great poem. I loved the flow. I give it a 5/5.

It's beautiful. Are you getting married? If so, good luck! ;)

Awwwww..it was a nice poem full of warm fuzzies. The flow was good and I liked how you described the happy feeling of being in love and spending time with that special person. Great job and keep it up!

This is absolutely beautiful. I remember when I felt that way.

I loved the title first off. It made me want to read more. Although the first stanza didn't quite catch my eye, after reading it began to get better and better. The last stanza caught me by suprise with the wedding vows. A lovely suprise though.

Your flow was smooth and your emotions were deep yet right to the point. Great job Joe. 5.5

Amber :]]