If only you were here

by Marie   May 23, 2007


I miss you already
even tho I've barely been gone
it seems like forever
It seems like so long

So long since I've felt your touch
So long since I've seen your face
so long since I've had my heart
beat at such fast pace

don't forget me please
because you're someone I'll never forget
I think without your memory
my mind would just plain quit

you're always what i think of
you're all that's in my head
you're what I always dream about
while lying in my bed

I've been crying
shedding tear after tear
knowing it'd all be better
if only you were here

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  • 17 years ago

    by Corruption

    Awesome poem you did a great job on it lol
    thanks for the comment also

    keenan

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Beautifully penned well done! Just a suggestion to use punctuations :) because a poem without a punctuation is like a song without a tune. :) but overall its really good :) I find it sweet and the flow was good! 5/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by geeeeee

    "So long since I've felt your touch
    So long since I've seen your face
    so long since I've had my heart
    beat at such fast pace"

    This was a really touching poem and I could feel real emotion in it. When you are apart from the people you love, a day can pass yet it feels like eternity. But no matter the distance, you can not break the feeling of love. Loved this poem.

    Take Care.

  • 17 years ago

    by malina

    I really liked it ....

  • 17 years ago

    by Kayla

    I love this poem! excellent work!!
    definitely a 5/5!! keep writting girrl you're very good!
    Kayla

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