I love this poem! excellent work!!
definitely a 5/5!! keep writting girrl you're very good!
Kayla

I really liked it ....

"So long since I've felt your touch
So long since I've seen your face
so long since I've had my heart
beat at such fast pace"

This was a really touching poem and I could feel real emotion in it. When you are apart from the people you love, a day can pass yet it feels like eternity. But no matter the distance, you can not break the feeling of love. Loved this poem.

Take Care.

Beautifully penned well done! Just a suggestion to use punctuations :) because a poem without a punctuation is like a song without a tune. :) but overall its really good :) I find it sweet and the flow was good! 5/5!

Awesome poem you did a great job on it lol
thanks for the comment also

keenan