by Vanessa
I really really loved this, I mean for a non rhyming poem i found this to be exceptionally. mean, the flow couldn't be better and the word choice is briallent, the emtion were deep and clear, perfectly penned, and amzingly written. great job, and you can take this as an hinest comment. 5/5 although in my mind you deserve more. |
by Melpomene
Out of the 3 i've read i found this to be your best. I loved the non-ryhme you pulled that off greatly, and not alot of people can do that. The flow flawlss. and your vocab choice was amazing for this poem. Truely the best i've read of yours. Well done on a nicely penned poem~mel |
I think that by not rhyming this poem you made it a lot more enjoyable to read, and it said exactly what you felt. I loved the words and the meaning behind the poem - Excellent job 5/5 |
Beautiful work...n by not rhyiming the poem flowed beautifully...n the choice of words was amazing n u've penned the emotions depl....great wrk! |
Hum along too = hum along to |
Hum along too |
by xo kisses xo
Omg! that is wonderful u did a beautiful job writing that. i like it not rhyming. very well done 5/5 |
by e LIZ a beth
Great job, you already know my thoughts |
OH MY GOSH!!! this is my favorite poem by you! |
by Fsams
Though this was a free verse, I did not feel that this doesnt rhyme. cz the flow was v beautiful. Perfect 5/5 |
by Startle Me
On your first stanza... |
by Startle Me
I don't know if I should vote. |
For something without a rhyming scheme it was really well written, it flows very nicely...many times people cram a word into a sentence that doesn't fit just because it has to rhyme, so its a refreshing change to see something raw like this, great work - keep it up |
by Bug1219
I like it it was really good in my opinion. keep it up |
by Boy
Aaah ahh itsawesome you compared very well wiht things. to her. i loved your poem take care 5/5 |
I love the metaphors you use |
I love this poem, i love the way u wrote it and everythin.. great work keep it up 5/5 |
by rita
Very nice poem good job |
by mmHmm
I really like your poem. It voices what a lot of people feel. i beleive poems don't have to rhyme and flow perfectly they're lyrics from the heart and they're the words that a lot of us feel but don't say |
by Jerrica
This poem is deep and very good it riminds me of a person I love. |