Holy cow! You just wrote what Ive been thinking for the past forever! You did it so well too! It was so full of pain and full of truth. Im sorry that you feel this way, because this feeling sucks. Great Job!

I love this poem, I can relate to the feeling you're describing. The last line is one my favorites, good ending for a good poem. Keep writing!

This was amazing. i love it. it is very original. i love the last line. i have a question though, the person u are talking to, is it urself or actually someone else??

I understand it better now that u told me u were talking to urself. this line is reallygood:

Pretty soon I'll be normal- completely conformed.
Blending in is better than being strange and deformed.

5/5

WOW!!...u've got the feeling across so perfectly thru this one.....n i so loved the last line...n the whole write was like soo filled with so much pain..i loved it..n christ!i can so very well relate to this one too...
Excellent work
5/5
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