Wonderful work, Isabelle. It is filled with a lot of meaning. 5/5. Please check out my new poems if you get the chance.

~Lizzie~

I can feel her heart breaking! juss the way that u worded it made me feel it! Great!! 5/5!

Ahaaaaa. it made me sad... i can feel the pain of your love 5/5 take care

I LOVE the ending of this...so beautiful and hard hitting.
The imagery you painted was beautiful, it creates very vivid pictures.
Try eliminating some of the fillers to make the flow better.