I think it's very beautiful, i really like it

C'est tres bien! :)
hehe french.
anywaaays. i really liked the poem alot. and it reminds me of myself in a few ways. also the way you write.
i loves it :)

Rachel, once again you have done it.. You have manage to apture and hold the readers attention. Love the poem 'to death' if i may use that term.. Love your tone, style, just love it all. I can totally relate to this, you know my story.. Keep up the good work..

Hope

I really liked it...it reminded me of me and my ex he switched his feelings so much it was verry confusing and hard to deal with i really liked it and by the way thanks for the comment on my poem i appreciated it very much

Good I can relate 5/5

--Lindsey