Midnight Breath

by mier   May 23, 2007


The words trapped in my eyes,
if only you could read my pain.
My hope burns with you,
my heart drowns in the rain.

Your eyes hauntingly beautiful,
like the moon weeping in the skies.
I can't paint a picture of you,
without sorrow in my eyes.

I see you in my shadow,
you reside in my tears.
You carved a fear in my soul,
you poisoned my memories.

At night I wait to dream,
lie patiently in the dark.
Sacrifice a thousand suns,
I don't want to wake up.

Tonight, I'll say goodbye,
embrace the arrival of death.
Sink in the static nightmare,
I hold my midnight breath.

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  • 17 years ago

    by cuddelyxbutxviciousXxX

    This was a good poem, excellent really. i liked the rhythm and everything. keep writing!

  • 17 years ago

    by SeGrAdA

    Oh such a powerful strong poem, very unique very different frm everything i read so far... :D
    well done!!!!!!!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    Wow, superbly written poem. Imagery is incredible and topic is unique. Wording is amazing. You created haunting atmosphere.
    Well done! This poem deserves more than 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Excellent poem, I enjoyed reading it. You're really good writer. First stanza is my favorite, but I like the rest of the poem,too.