by m00ngurl May 23, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
In the distance where time and space are frozen, without choice a girl sits on her own. With no place to go or preference to move, her body aches sitting with her knees hard upon the cold marble floor abyss, in prayer. Hands clenched upon her lap shuddering with agony so disheartening her heart breaks. Isolated for always with no love to share or give. Her soul floats before her eyes pleading to be set free. Tears rain down with neglect ion for she holds no power to set her deserting, dying soul free. Her face fading into the darkened space as the tears fall down down, down like a waterfall many feet's high. |
by Baby Rainbow
Well, where do i start? first of all thats in my faves, thank you for sharing it. your talent is absolutely fantastic. your english skill and the writing and words. its all very well put together. asll the emotion in this poem is so strong and breath taking to read. you really have put so much effort into this poem and i hope you are very proud, i envy this talent. very well done to you and please keep writing xxx |