WOW! this is a beautiful poem! The structure was hard but you were able to do it! Well done! I really dont like short poems but this one is different! I love it! 5/5! as always.

Gem
Great job on this poetry form. Love the thoughts.

Take care
Love Cindy

A simple poem for a simple subject...and easy for simple minds to understand, like mine! =P Lol...great job, Gem. You did a nice job expressing something simple and keeping it that way. Keep it up! :) 5/5 as always!
~Midnight Sun

The poem is so beautiful and tender lol almost heart warming ,loved it.

P.s. Sorry dear due hectic shedules in work havnt been able to write and comment lately, also suffering from worse writers block :P.
Hope all is well with you.Take care n keep writing.

Woot woot Gem dear ..... awesome message!

Well done dear heart, well done

T.C
Luanne

Reading this adorable piece reminds me of Wilde's wit...I, too, adore simple pleasures and simple things. But he made me giggle when he said, "I adore simple pleasures. It is the last refuge of the complex." Hehe. =)

A wonderfully-written, thoughtful piece. A delight to read, as always, my dear! Love, Debbie

Aww this is cool Gem!
It is VERY difficult well for me
to write these kind of poems
So I think it's even cooler
that you wrote one
I think it all seemed to fit
and the last word was good
it didnt leave you hanging
at all
great work gem
your poems are the best
5/5
love always
kaila

I think most people do take the small things that the world has to offer for granted. But if we take the time to notice and appreciate the small things, it makes the big things that much better. excellent job unique style of poetry 5/5

Truely beautiful. Emotions were strong and really heartfelt. The style was good I used to write a fair few of this style myself. Capturing peae of poetry with such peaceful words. Nice meaning portrayed. Good job here yet again. Well done~mel

Such truth in these words..I liked how you started it off with an example of a small thing which all too often is taken for granted, however, at the same time I felt like the first stanza could have easily been more explanation on the whole aspect of the poem and the point you were trying to get across; otherwise it`s like you get to the second stanza and BAM it just changes. It was awesome how it was, don`t get me wrong..just a thought I had while I read this.

5.5
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