The First

by Saul   May 23, 2007


In times when the
Storms of Pain and
Confusion attack my
Head and Heart YOU
are the Eye of the
storm that helps
settle my Soul.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Dying Beautifully

    Simple yet complete I like it alot. The short ones are always packed with more emotion and are always straight forward about the authors emotions at that PRECISE moment. It gives the reader so much more. Great job. Truely enjoyed it.

    Rebbeca

  • 17 years ago

    by Chemistry

    Wow, I found this really beautiful

  • 17 years ago

    by Michael

    I gave it a 4 only because it should be a quote, but then thinking about it I'm not sure which it's better off.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kayla

    Short and sweet!

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