Comments : The First

  • 17 years ago

    by Kayla

    Short and sweet!

  • 17 years ago

    by Michael

    I gave it a 4 only because it should be a quote, but then thinking about it I'm not sure which it's better off.

  • 17 years ago

    by Chemistry

    Wow, I found this really beautiful

  • 15 years ago

    by Dying Beautifully

    Simple yet complete I like it alot. The short ones are always packed with more emotion and are always straight forward about the authors emotions at that PRECISE moment. It gives the reader so much more. Great job. Truely enjoyed it.

    Rebbeca