Rose

by Jade Shadow Rose   May 23, 2007


Releases me from past pain,
Replenishes my strength,
Responds to me, replies,
Recalls to me at length,

Obscured like a cloud,
Obvious, but elusive,
Omitted, out of reach,
Our everything in one, conclusive,

Stable, grounded, but so up high,
Solving, calculating, but human,
So beautiful, so graceful,
So must to me, and me, subhuman,

Evolving, beyond my dreams,
Exclusively, taking me gaze over,
Exquisitely formed into a rose,
Especially important, I think, I love her.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Meiko

    If you love her, then try not to let her go.

  • 17 years ago

    by Elizabetta

    Wow this is so great! I loved how you used your words, they were perfect. 5/5 Pleaze comment on some of my poems sometime if you want.

    ~Lizzie~

  • 17 years ago

    by Kayla

    THIS IS SOOOOOO SWEET AND SOOOOO GOOD! I admire your work! AWESOME JOB!
    ~Kayla