Comments : Good Night my loving Mother

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "I'm sorry that i cannot stay,
    my wounds and mind wont mend,
    and please watch over the faithful dog,
    my last and only friend."

    aww, that stanza was so bittersweet, i loved the way you brought the dog into it.
    I'm probably ignorant to the true meaning behind this piece but from what i've gathered, it's really upsetting
    5/5
    *Gem*

    (Wow! You're on the site!!! lol)