by repair her heart May 23, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Unresolvable disgrace that can be contagious |
by Viola
This is really great... so touching and deep. the emotion is portrayed so well here. your word choice is also very good. great job! =] |
by Krzysztof J
Wow was this ever heartfelt :) i really enjoyed this work of art thank you for writing it :)) 5/5 |
by Boy
Aah its awesome. i loved you writing styel you have great talent. take care |
by Fsams
I read this one with full concentration and its just one of the best free verse I have read. Awsome...u deserve only 5/5 |
by caitlin
Very awesome i love the how you grip the words to form a certain tone to each line, its as if a dark story is taking place in black and white but with vivd emotions. wow isnt a big enough word to describe how teasing or taunting it becomes once you start to read it. good job best buddy! |