Comments : First Kiss

  • 17 years ago

    by vaniia

    Man who ever is this is freakin poem is ova tha hook ghurl juss knoe that therez otha guyz out there that are waitin for a perfect ghurl like yooh and who ever that guy that lost you was hella stooopid...

  • 17 years ago

    by hani

    Very nice and beautiful , good work 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Marie

    Ehh.. I liked the word choice.. love the meaning.. loved the rhyme scheme.. but.. the rhythm was off in a couple places...4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by tiffani

    G00D. i LiKE THiS 0NE AL0T. L0VE TiFFANi

  • 17 years ago

    by Debbie

    #3: Ohh I like this. Although the lines need tightening up, I'd still give you my props for writing such an adorable, meaningful poem. Methought that you've written it rather wonderfully. I gave it a 5/5!

    Debbie