Very Good one!!!
really liked it.
5/5

God bless u

Beautiful touchin peice!..heartfelt filled with disappearing hope,beauty,n well penned emotions...
but i guess the last line has a an typo error...maybe u could revise n correct tht part...other thn tht good choiceof words n i liked it!!!=)
5/5!
xxPoojaxx

Hassan
This poem is beautiful. It brought tears to my eyes. Awesome job!

Breezing light of love
On the grave above
Fades the sunshine
that is the End of darkness

These lines touched me very deeply.
Take care
Your friend Cindy

I thought this was a wonderful poem.. very full of emotions.. i did see a few errors but those are easily fixed.. 5/5

Very nice, there was a few mistakes in your wording but all together it was very nice, 5/5

5/5. i must say. your very talented as well, thank you for you comment :)

This is an excellent love poem, the words and meaning behind the poem were very powerful. True love never dies even after death, it goes on forever. Excellent job 5/5

I love this.its just so sad and heart touvhing!.......keep it up i look forward to more of ur writing

And Unspoken words lost in heart

That line i found to be pure beauty. It was very heartfelt and touched my soul. amazingly sad but beautiful. Well done~mel

Wonderful poem.. very enjoyable read.. sad but still filled with strong emotions

Very nice and perfect flowing every words and lines..the emoitions are truly expresssing well.. but only this lines it makes me confused!

In his memories and
Thousands of memories
In his love

i think it should be...

in her memories and
thousand of memories
In her love

coz i think u are talking about the girl.. but honestly it was excellent work..

Awww
I am so sorry
for everyone in this poem really
you did a fantab job
nice work

Heya
nice poem ;) you write with a lot of sense , that's good. 5/5 =)

x

Nice and tuoching one i love it pal

:):):):)...........:)

Wow!!...very beautiful n touching...well penned...it was kind of sad..yeah..but really touching n lovely..filled wth emeotions
Great job!=)
5/5
xxPoojaxx

That was very beautiful, so much emotion. I like poems like these, they kind of put you in a trance, just trying to picture what this person is going through. 5/5

That was really good.
that happend to my friend to.
He was such a lover,a really good person.
But i really enjoyed reading that.

I liked this, the word choice was beautiful and powerful, flow was good throughout and the imagery you used created vivid pictures.
I thought the ending was beautifully wrapped up, very hardhitting, beautiful and intense at the same time.

It was really good..but again, it could use some touch ups..There was lots of emotion is this write though..very touching.. 4/5 Great job
Tyanna

Her Days were spending hopeless
`Spending ? Do you mean "Spent" ?
And Times was flowing like waterway
`Time
She was burning in flame
`In a flame

Her Thousands of minutes
In his memories and
Thousands of memories
In his love
Burned in fire
`In a fire
I like those lines . They hold strong emotion , despite the repitition of "Memories" it works . And it`s sweet .

Her Breathe departed this life
`Breath

Death embraced her life
`Love that . I like the personification of Death .

a one more true lover was died
`had died ?

but the story is not end yet
`But the story hasn`t ended yet
(Watch for your VT)

That was beautiful . The emotion was clear . The expressing of feelings was just ah`mazing .
..__MiNDYY