This was very good. Lots of emotion in this.. And you can tell this came from the heart.. Very well done. .5/5

Very nicely expressed poem of love, loss and sadness......nothing is ever lost...love is forever.....

Person dies
But their love alive
Spreading rays of light
It stays in the life
Always and forever ..

So beautiful....All the best, Debbie

This is the best poem i have ever read... it almost made me cry! it reminded me of something that happened in my life too...
keep it up you are an exellent writer... 5/5

<3 jess

Person dies
But their love alive
Spreading rays of light
It stays in the life
Always and forever ..

This line really caught my attention. This is such a true line and very well worded. your poem flows well and its well penned. 5/5 all the way

fsams

Couple words to describe this poem:
WOW, beautiful, amazing, well-written...and MAASH'ALLAH!!!!! *wordless*