Wow!..this one is beautiful...u've potrayed emotions well thru these lines...5/5 for this well penned heart felt peice
Kp writing!
xxPoojaxx

Your emotions are strong in this poem as well...

*Ahem*
The ryhming was good and the flow was great. The ideas and emotions were strong and I can relate. Sometimes sitting in the darkness is all you can do. Sometimes you'll have to wait. It's sometimes a game. The waiting game, maybe?

It was a great poem, no matter how short.
Great Work!
5/5

-Ally