Lurking in the shadows

by bleeding limegrenn   May 23, 2007


Lurking in the shadows
something not for here or there
something totally different
pulling us off one by one

sleeping under tightly wrapped sheets
watching you from the shadows
ready to strike any any moment

once you close your eyes
they may never open

its not from hell or even satin himself
so if you want to die
so close your eyes and dream

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    So I liked it
    but it really needs to stick to a pattern
    in my opinion

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    It was good for me. uhm you spelled satan wrong XD anyway it flowed well! good job. I like the title too! keep up the good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by XxXTwistedxXxIllusionXxX

    I also think this is one of your best, (personally) it is very impressing, i love how you get close to tell what it is in your dreams that lurks in the shadows and yet you don't total verify what/who it is... great job!

    -love whitney-

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    You spelled SATAN wrong, lol, but anyway i thought the wording was nice, i think one of your best yet

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