You spelled SATAN wrong, lol, but anyway i thought the wording was nice, i think one of your best yet

I also think this is one of your best, (personally) it is very impressing, i love how you get close to tell what it is in your dreams that lurks in the shadows and yet you don't total verify what/who it is... great job!

-love whitney-

It was good for me. uhm you spelled satan wrong XD anyway it flowed well! good job. I like the title too! keep up the good work!

So I liked it
but it really needs to stick to a pattern
in my opinion