Sick of life

by moonlil   May 23, 2007


I long to die
I am so tired to cry
I don't want to stay
and suffer all day
I just want to go
cause I miss you so
I pray each day
that you take me away
I'm so sick of all
I'm about to fall
I'm dying inside
my broken heart I cannot hide
It bleeds so much
I need your healing touch
Please take me away
cause I don't want to stay
Let me die
and say to the world goodbye

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  • 17 years ago

    by Woe

    Once again, very good. i like the short lines, makes it easier to read. :D great job, <3.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    T was an awesome poem, hope you don't feel that way, great job . your friend Tracy dean 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Great job on this piece. The emotions of sadness can be felt in your words.

    I need your healing touch
    Please take me away
    cause I don't want to stay

    These lines really touched my heart.
    Take care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "I don't want to stay
    and suffer all day
    I just want to go
    cause I miss you so"

    That quatern is soo sad.. i can relate to it from the bottom of my heart...
    5/5 m'dear
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by James

    :(

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