:(

"I don't want to stay
and suffer all day
I just want to go
cause I miss you so"

That quatern is soo sad.. i can relate to it from the bottom of my heart...
5/5 m'dear
*Gem*

Great job on this piece. The emotions of sadness can be felt in your words.

I need your healing touch
Please take me away
cause I don't want to stay

These lines really touched my heart.
Take care Cindy

T was an awesome poem, hope you don't feel that way, great job . your friend Tracy dean 5/5

Once again, very good. i like the short lines, makes it easier to read. :D great job, <3.