Sweetie that was awesome , you did a great job on that ,I loved it very deep, could actually feel your pain, good job, proud of you one your frist, your friend Tracy~5/5~

I thought that it was great. I loved the vocab you used and the details that were all through out the poem. I give it a 5/5 :)

The poem over all was fantastic I loved the story and how her preocupation about death was dotted through out the piece. the flow was great and the spelling awe it was so good who cares about the gammar great job all and all. I very much enjoyed every word. message me about a club later take care Robert

The poem over all was fantastic I loved the story and how her preocupation about death was dotted through out the piece. the flow was great and the spelling awe it was so good who cares about the gammar great job all and all. I very much enjoyed every word. message me about a club later take care Robert

The description of thought was awesome; the reader could feel her inter thoughts from beginning to end. Great job. May your heart be filled with peace and joy one day soon.

sadaddy

Wow that was amazing, I really loved it.

This is another powerful poem on such a strong topic, the words cut deep like knives. I liked the line where you said "hiding my eyes with the morning paper" I could picture it in my head so perfectly. The imagery of the poem is fantastic. I also liked the part about forgetting to leave a note, in life we sometimes make mistakes that we can't go back and erase, that was definately one. amazing job 5/5