by Anthony smith May 23, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I swear it was love at first sight, |
by Eraklis
Amazing work, I am very impressed by how much emotion your sending through with your words. |
by Brea McDade
Very good poem luv it |
by erely
Your feelings read true and intense... |
by becca
WOW! this poem is seeped in so much emotion! it is so strong and ur love and desire for this women is so clear. im rly glad u asked me to read it! its a a really beautiful piece of work and is rly powerful! definately keep it up and keep writin! xXx |
Hmm...rather contrasting on a simple topic...nice one, it appeals to me rather as a song lyrics or a short story rather than a poem..and well, it's good...=) |