by SomewhereAmongThePieces May 23, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
When all you need is love |
I thought this was a venting poem with a very nice rhythm at first The ending was the hook that makes this poem stand out from the rest. The middle really reminded me of a venting poem I wrote about someone that I thought rejected me I think you did a great job with this unusual poem 5/5 |
by K3LSI3
This is sad but also really good.i liked it |
1. good poems |
by Baby Rainbow
Aww thats so sad but its really good. you have a lot of emotions in it. i hope it all goes ok for you xxxxxxxxxx |