I really like it....it was a great idea how u did that...love it keep up the good work

Cutecuteucute.

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but alas, none of [insert a pronoun or something] worked. I regret to tell you, the only true healer is time[.?]

Once again awesome although I had already read these they are still really awesome!!

Well, i liked it more than the first part, because i got an insight into the heart's life and feelings.
Well done, and i'm off to read the next part!
love Tara

Aww. poor heart..lol anyway i really like what you did. I think this is a good way to show how your heart and mind comunicate.. or should.. it should not just be your whole mind or your whole heart..you have to slip it up into both.. another 5/5.

Hey,
aww i feel bad for the heart, the 'story' keeps getting beter, I especially like this line: the only true healer is time,, thats awesome! 5/5
kisses stephanie

Wow..i like this one too! at first, to be honest i thought it was all gonna be the mind in denial, [quite boring] but the message at the end, gave the poem some light...didnt expect it coming, so the even more better =] xx

This one was just as ggod as the ifrst one, I didn't see it coming this way at all. perfect word choice, deep emtion, I am on my way to read other parts now, really this has me intrested, I couldn't stop here if I wanted too. 5/5

Oh my god...its only the second one and I am crying...this is perfect! I dont know what to say about it...if the rest get any better I might just die a happy man!

For some reasons, I find this second part of the series much better than the first piece. Perhaps the flow was quite rhythmic and/or fluid throughout. I love the tone of voice of the subject (the heart)--soft, tender, and affectionate. On the other hand, it is delicate and fragile, nonetheless. The fact that you applied the subject's attributes into its tone of voice is quite charming. I'm enchanted! Debbie

"It is simply to big." (sic) (= Too was misspelled in the line.)

I like this piece. the flow was very good. alot of emotion put into it. well done. 5/5!!!!!!!

~Chelsea~