That is soooo good and I'm not just saying that. I love how it rythmes, good advanced wordings good feelings ect. I just like it all. I hate my dad btw I'm gonna go write a poem about it =D thanks alot!! :p

Continue to test me, for that makes me strong,
I know that with You I'll be home before long.

i loved your poem good work take care

I like a lot your poem cause is coming from your heart...And i know what you felt when you wote it.Anyway,you have done a great work.Take care of you.Best regards,Michelle XxX