by Startle Me May 24, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
The lady watches the board in front, |
by Kaila
Very good work |
by Boy
Nice image of words. and idea was good. dlow of words was also understandable. it was nice work you have talnet take care |
by Marc Ortiz
A rather good poem. and obviously not your best XD anyway flow was smooth I like the way you describe the girl! well done. Good choice of words! 5/5 as always |
by BreeAnna
I really liked this one. good job. |
by Robert
I really did like this piece because it gave the girl alot more emotion and you displayed the images of her imagination well. the flow was great the use of description was very well done all a ll this was a great poem keep up the good work. PLot121 |