Very, very cute!nic write! keep up the good work!
god bless!

Wow...talk about amazing flow...its just like a song...
amusing, and to the point...are all ur poems that short?
if u like short poems maybe u should do sequels...
lovely imagination uve got there...
any other poem ud like rrc...ill be more than glad to help..=D

I really enjoyed this write :) i gave it 5/5 it made me remenise of a few things in my life :) thank you for that :)

I really really liked it, but why
would you put it in
the
FUNNY POEMS section

i dont find it funny,but

still a
5/5