Love Is/ My Love

Love is like a bird
soaring through the sky.
Singing a sweet, sweet song
that is as old as time it's self.

i love that stanza right there...it really stands out amongst the rest....i think its awesome that you can have a poem with no rhyming scheme and still have it flow so nicely..excellent work

That's a beautiful poem! I liked the similes you used. I could picture the birds and flowers and all of the delicate beauty they bring, and I could see how that fit into the poem. Great job! 5/5

Well written, brillantly chosen words, imagery vivid, and emtion clear. I like the free verse you write in, It is refreshing to sometimes read a poem that doesn't rhyme, keep up the good work 5/5

Wow, this was beautiful... it described exactly what i thought of love...lol... and you did it perfectly... wow again... it flowed so strongly and smoothly..
amazing.
5/5
gabriella

Ahhh...now this one I liked...really got my emotions going. Much better images and a clearer message! Good Job!