You are skilled in free verse, and the imagery and rhythmn of this poem is just beautiful

Now this is a poem with emotions.. I loved your metaphors it really describe our love in realistic life.. there was some grammar errors but its simple to fix.. so I hope you will never stop writing bcause you are a great writer.. keep up the work

Perfectly penned free verse!.....filled with love n perfect metaphors...so so true..loved it...intense!
kp it up!
5/5!
xxPoojaxx

"Singing sweet a sweet song
that is as old as time it's self."

i love this part, nice wording, keep up the good work

To me, spaces signifies pauses.
Now this confused me in these lines
[[When taken care of it can
grow into a beautiful flower.]]
It doesn't seem right to pause after can.
Hmm...

I dunno.
But to me it would just sound better
If you take off the "Love is"
I hate repitition.
It unnecessary babble.
So it would sound like

a young blossom
slowly blooming when nourished.
When taken care of it can
grow into a beautiful flower.
like a bird
soaring through the sky.
Singing sweet a sweet song
that is as old as time it's self.
Blah.
Something like that.

I love your ending.
It's soo... dramatic and discriptive.

I wasn't really into your poem until the very end.
It wasn't the worst I've read from you.
It certainly wasn't the best.
So my dear, I'm going to have to give you a 4.
Sorry :[

Startle Me has stated everything I would have had to say. Except that I personally see value in a little repetition.

This piece is beautiful. The descriptions of love really stand out. 5 frm me

I think it would have been cool if you would have done 3 stanzas with my love instead of just one because it would balanca out and look more structured but oh well I really enjoyed this poem no matter how structured it was

Hey,
a nice and sweet love poem, I like the way you describe love in the first stanza its very unique, I could sense the emotion in it, I love it, you're an great writer from what I have read now. 5/5
kisses stephanie

Ahhh...now this one I liked...really got my emotions going. Much better images and a clearer message! Good Job!

Wow, this was beautiful... it described exactly what i thought of love...lol... and you did it perfectly... wow again... it flowed so strongly and smoothly..
amazing.
5/5
gabriella

Well written, brillantly chosen words, imagery vivid, and emtion clear. I like the free verse you write in, It is refreshing to sometimes read a poem that doesn't rhyme, keep up the good work 5/5

That's a beautiful poem! I liked the similes you used. I could picture the birds and flowers and all of the delicate beauty they bring, and I could see how that fit into the poem. Great job! 5/5

Love is like a bird
soaring through the sky.
Singing a sweet, sweet song
that is as old as time it's self.

i love that stanza right there...it really stands out amongst the rest....i think its awesome that you can have a poem with no rhyming scheme and still have it flow so nicely..excellent work