Tell The Truth

by Brittany C   May 24, 2007


Look at me
in the eye
and tell me
how you feel.

Tell the truth,
I know it
may hurt me
but I'll live.

See me for
who I really am.
Not by what
others may say.

I want to get to
know who you are.
Please don't be afraid
to let me get close.

Tell the truth now.
I have always done
just that for you.
I want you to understand.

Let's just give it a chance.

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  • 13 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    True<3 regardless of what others say you should always take a risk. it can turn up being one of the greatest things in life && if it doesnt work out at least u can say you tried. Love it(:
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    This poem I liked. It was left open for interputation. It is really something that I think can boost any poem.

    It was very well written and the flow was on and so were the syllables. There is one minor thing that doesn't sit well with me though.

    "Look at me
    in the eye"

    That line just seems wrong..grammarically(if that's even a word lol)

    Perhaps something like :

    "Look right here
    In my two eyes"

    something different like that.

    Other than that, I can only say great job and I really liked the poem.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Ridd1ck Yulas

    Very good i can relate to this as if i wrote it.
    It was probably me ibut i couldnt find the rythem. but other than that really good i gave it a 4/5 because i couldnt find the rythem. but The lyrics were really good

  • 16 years ago

    by sexyCheckers

    Love this poem!!!
    I hate how the truth (most of the time) is so easy to say, but people lie anyway....
    I know that I lie all the time, and yessss I know it's bad and I contradict myself in alot of my poems.
    It's so sad how the world is these days...
    Hmmn ANYWAYS awesome poem luv;;
    Could you check out my new poem
    "Can't You Tell She Regrets This?"
    Tnx :] xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    This poem is good but fairly simple. This was meant to be like this though i think so i cant complain. I liked it actually. :D xxx alex xxx