I [[now]] it
That doesn't make sense.
Don't you mean, I know it?
Throughout your poem
There was only one stanza
That I did not like
Answer my questions
don't be afraid
I wont be mad.
Though maybe sad.
It was... cliched, to say the least.
All in all
Wonderful, dear.
I loved the format that you used.
5/5?

To tell the truth I can tell where you are coming from in this delghtful free flowing poem

I found there to be a mistake in this poem. Very simple one at that. "now" Shouldnt it be "know" I liked the short lines it made the poem flow nicely although i didn't like these lines

Answer my questions
don't be afraid
I wont be mad.
Though maybe sad

It seemed some what predictable if you understand what i mean.
This poem was good enjoyed reading it. Good effort~mel

This poem also needs something.. it feels so bare.. I understand the meaning.. but at the same time i don't feel the emotion.. so try to add some powerful words in it.. make it attract a reader's eye! I kno you can do it .. good luck and keep u p the work

I liked it even though it sounded more like a letter you would write to someone, the structure was good and i really liked it, 5/5

I agree with Stephanie. This poem felt like it was meant for a specific person. Since I'm not that person, I had a harder time feeling anything form it. Still, were such a poem written to me, by someone I knew, I'd definitely would be moved!

I'll tell the truth, i liked it. I think the lines were a little too short, but overall a good poem
love Tara-Kay

I like this one, u have maintained a good flow. I think it would have been superb if it rhymed. he he great work

This had a great flow and all, but it wasnt unique. it sounds too familar.

I'll read another one.

I know what you were talking about but I think the emotion or hope just wasn;t there i think you need to make me want to know why this person deserves to give you a chance you know. I really enjoyed what the message was about though nice work

I like this poem alot. so much emotion put into it. well written. the flow was great. 5/5!

~Chelsea~

Hey,
I like the structure of this poem, its short and easy to read in other words perfect, the flow was great, my favorite stanza is:

See me for
who I really am.
Not by what
others may say

and you're right he needs to see you for who you really are..5/5
kisses stephanie

Mmmm...it was ok. Not anything great, but it wasn't too bad. I think I just dont really like poems with such a short structure...find it hard to find too much meaning and too much to relate to in it...sorry...

Hey great poem.. i lyk it.. :) 5/5

This poem is good but fairly simple. This was meant to be like this though i think so i cant complain. I liked it actually. :D xxx alex xxx

Love this poem!!!
I hate how the truth (most of the time) is so easy to say, but people lie anyway....
I know that I lie all the time, and yessss I know it's bad and I contradict myself in alot of my poems.
It's so sad how the world is these days...
Hmmn ANYWAYS awesome poem luv;;
Could you check out my new poem
"Can't You Tell She Regrets This?"
Tnx :] xx

Very good i can relate to this as if i wrote it.
It was probably me ibut i couldnt find the rythem. but other than that really good i gave it a 4/5 because i couldnt find the rythem. but The lyrics were really good

This poem I liked. It was left open for interputation. It is really something that I think can boost any poem.

It was very well written and the flow was on and so were the syllables. There is one minor thing that doesn't sit well with me though.

"Look at me
in the eye"

That line just seems wrong..grammarically(if that's even a word lol)

Perhaps something like :

"Look right here
In my two eyes"

something different like that.

Other than that, I can only say great job and I really liked the poem.

5/5

True<3 regardless of what others say you should always take a risk. it can turn up being one of the greatest things in life && if it doesnt work out at least u can say you tried. Love it(:
5/5