Sometimes I wish I could just start life over again with the wisdom and experience that I have today. The reality is that theres no turning back, these are our lives now and forever. Well probably anyway lol 5/5 again |
Lol...This one is soo true...lovely write....filled with beauty n meaning....well penned..n excellent choice of words..Great write..kp it up! |
by pookiengurgi
Wow....that was...um...well.different.but interesting and extremely well written...I like what it was about, the way you put it all together...definite 5/5 |
by Jenni
WOW!!! This was very well written! I loved the rhyming scheme you used and how you took a word from the previous stanza and used it in your first line of the next stanza. Excellent poem! 5/5 |
You need to read my poem called edge its kinda familiar to that nice job its hard to time but life sux- raindrops 5/5 |